There was a light. A bright, warm light.
Eliya opened her eyes and looked into the beautiful face of a man. He smiled at her and whispered something, but she couldn´t quite hear what he said.
The man seemed to shine from the inside out, and the light that surrounded him was bright and warm. The breathtaking light even shone into the darkest corners of her heart. Everything was illuminated and flooded by the light.
Eliya sat up and gazed at the man.
He had wings. Snow white wings, which shone as bright as the man himself.
His long golden hair danced in the gentle wind, though Eliya did not know from where it came. Her window, oddly, was closed.
“Are you…an angel?”, Eliya asked hesitantly.
Again, the man whispered something, and again, she couldn´t hear his words.
“I…I can´t understand you…”, she murmured sadly and lowered her head so that he could not see the tears burning in her eyes.
The man quietly sat down beside her on the bed and put a hand on her shoulder.
An unbelievable warmth and peace spread through her body her from where he had touched her. The tears disappeared, and a moment later, she didn´t know why she had cried.
And suddenly she could hear him. There were no words he spoke with. He spoke through his heart.
Now that she had calmed down and the riot in her heart had become peaceful once more, she could understand him.
Again, she asked, “Are you an angel?” Instead of answering, he smiled and stroked her face.
A moment later, Eliya could feel that something changed. The warmth that his touch brought made her cringe, yet also have her a feeling she had missed all the years: a feeling of ease.
She wanted this moment to last forever and prayed that the time would stand still, but before she could get a hold of it, the angel had disappeared and an unbelievable tiredness came over her…
On this page, you can:
Start your own free art collection. Sign up here!DownloadSee more of this artist:LightAngelSky's ProfileLightAngelSky's GalleryLightAngelSky's Prints
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
Author's Comments
Here´s the second part of chapter 1 - Tears of the unicorns
Many thanks to  for beta reading >___<Here´s the first part [link] The story: It starts with Eliya who´s being bullied in her class - bullied my everyone - and she thinks about killing herself, but she isn´t doing it...she´s afraid of it. Caylen is sent to earth to show her the way back into the light which she had lost. They become friends and Eliya is happy again. Gabriel tells Caylen that his mission is completed, he stopped Eliya from killing herself and wandering through the darkness and orders him back to heaven. but Caylen knews that Eliya will fall back into the darkness if he´s leaving her, but he can´t disobey God´s order and he tell her, that he has to leave. Eliya don´t know about Caylen being an angel. As if this isn´t bad enough Eliya finds out on the same evening about being adopted and her adoptive parents hate her. That´s too much for her and without a second thinking she kills herself in her despair... Caylen can´t bear what happend and searches for a way to bring eliya back to life, even though it is forbidden, to give her a second chance. He finds the legend of the Holy Grail whose power is great enough to bring back the dead. Lian, a being of the dark race, a demon, is offering Caylen his help which Caylen accepts gladly. He shows him the way into the kingdom of the demons were he meets the emperor who wants to help him too and tells him the truth about the grail - the blood of a unicorn in the moment of his death collected in the Grail has the power to bring back the dead... Caylen sets off to Jun'Aris, the village of the unicorns, to catch one of them... That the beginning of the story XDDDDDD really complicated x___X''' Please leave a comment if you liked what you´re read, thank you! |
|
Report a Policy Violation
Site Map
Community News5307 Wacom: Bring Your Vision to Life - Dreams Contest$Moonbeam13
 reports, 1d 6h agoDeviantART and Wacom are proud to present the second Intuos4 "Bring Your Vision To Life" contest! Open to all artists all over the world, we challenge you to show us your dreams and aspirations for the future. Get drawing! 945 Love Unites Print Remix Contest w/ Shepard Fairey$gzobel
 reports, 1d 3m agoDeviantART has partnered with FAIR to help promote equality through The Love Unites Shepard Fairey Equality Project. We're asking deviants to align themselves with this cause and have their work judged by Shepard Fairey himself! 77 Daily Literature Deviations- November 13, 2009=DailyLitDeviations
 reports, 1d 18h agoDaily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it. Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article. In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you  the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.61 Daily Literature Deviations - November 14, 2009=DailyLitDeviations
reports, 17h 7m agoDaily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it. Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article. In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.53 Stock From October and info.^Hanratty-Stock
 reports, 1d 5h agoA (delayed) look back on October's stock and exciting events. Better late than pregnant! |
PollHaters... |
deviantART Loves You
Deviously serving the art and skin community for 3,386 days.
Only 266 days until our tenth birthday!
|
Deviousness
The Deviousness Award is an accolade which is traditionally handed out on the 1st of every month to one trully outstanding deviant. `Cyantre is one of the most helpful deviants within our community. With a positive attitude and a resourceful mind, you can always find him providing support and encouragement to those in need. Always looking for ways in which he can get more involved in our community, John's positive presence is to be aspired to. A well respected poet, John is a must-have on your deviantWATCH to make sure that you don't miss out on your dose of community inspiration. It's with great pleasure that the Deviousness Award for November 2009 goes to... Read More
|
Follow us on Twitter
Become a fan on Facebook
©2009 deviantART. All rights reserved
Comments
*lol* ne, ich find das bewundernswert, aber verlier bitte nicht die Hauptsache aus den Augen XDDD
PS: are you gonna draw Eliya? =O I would love to see a drawing of her = )
--
like an angel
Warum bisu nit ins icq gekommen <__<
--
"I have been and always shall be, your friend."
i should do one, i know XD''''
--
"I have been and always shall be, your friend."
--
like an angel
--
"I have been and always shall be, your friend."
Ah, wenn du weiterschreibselst, ist es ja gut ^.^ *brav* *brav*
Yet really sad.
Keep up the good writing, you're so descriptive. ^^
--
"I reject your reality and Substitute my own!" Adam Savage-Mythbusters
Proud owner of ~Channel-Keybladers
Come check us out!
*shot for self advertisting*
i´m glad you like my writing style ;O;
--
"I have been and always shall be, your friend."
Previous Page123Next Page